Talk:Atlas Vampire
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Wording?
[edit]The wording here is unsatisfactory, as it implies that the killer is known as the "Vampire Murder Case". However, I'm not entirely sure how best to reword it - any ideas? Jon Rob 13:27, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
- Im quite late, sorry, but i do agree. how about:
The Atlas Vampire is the nickname given to the unknown assailant who committed the unsolved "Vampire Murder" (also known as the Vampire Murder Case) in Stockholm, Sweden in 1932.
any better? ← κεηηε∂γ (talk) (contribs) 14:40, 14 March 2008 (UTC)
- Changed now, looks much better than it did. -- Scar † Contributions † 19:44, 30 April 2008 (UTC)
Translation
[edit]I have a translation of the Swedish article at User:EAR47/Atlas_Vampire. If anyone wants to merge, please do -- I'm a bit busy at the moment. Also the translated version is indeed more detailed than the current English version, but the style is also questionable -- it's told more like a murder mystery story than an encyclopedia article. EAR47 (talk) 16:58, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
- @EAR47: Well done, your translation corresponds well to the article on Swedish Wikipedia. I will add your translation after I make some futher references. Veckans brott highlighted the case with more sourced information. Shellwood (talk) 18:33, 13 October 2017 (UTC)